Why this matters
Clarity isn't just style - it's part of the argument. Fix these errors and your writing becomes easier to read, more persuasive, and - yes - more likely to get a better grade.
1. Subject–Verb Agreement
Incorrect: The list of items are on the desk.
Why: The subject is list (singular), not items (plural).
Fix: The list of items is on the desk.
Tip: Identify the subject (not the noun inside a prepositional phrase) and match the verb to it.
2. Comma Splices
Incorrect: She studied all night, she still failed the test.
Why: Two independent clauses joined only by a comma.
Fixes: Split into two sentences, use a semicolon, or add a conjunction: She studied all night. She still failed the test.
Tip: If both halves can stand alone, don’t join them with only a comma.
3. Misplaced & Dangling Modifiers
Incorrect: Walking through the door, the cake was on the table.
Why: The modifier walking through the door appears to modify the cake.
Fix: Walking through the door, I saw the cake on the table.
Tip: Ensure modifiers attach clearly to the noun they describe - if it sounds odd, rewrite.
4. Apostrophe Errors (its / it's / plurals)
Incorrect: The dog wagged it's tail.
Why: it's
= it is / it has; its
= possessive.
Fix: The dog wagged its tail.
Tip: Try expanding it's
to "it is" - if it fits, keep it's
, otherwise use its
.
5. Run-ons & Fused Sentences
Incorrect: I finished the paper I submitted it late.
Why: Two complete thoughts run together without punctuation.
Fix: I finished the paper, but I submitted it late.
Tip: If you can split into two sentences without losing meaning, do it.
6. Word Choice Confusion (affect / effect, their / there / they're)
Incorrect: The new policy will effect students negatively.
Why: effect
is usually a noun; affect
is usually a verb.
Fix: The new policy will affect students negatively.
Tip: When unsure, swap a simple synonym: if "influence" fits, use affect
.
7. Sentence Fragments
Incorrect: Because the experiment failed.
Why: Dependent clause without a main clause.
Fix: Because the experiment failed, we repeated it using a new method.
Tip: Ensure every sentence has a subject + main verb that completes the thought.
8. Faulty Parallelism
Incorrect: She likes reading, to jog, and swimming.
Why: Mixed grammatical forms in a list (gerund / infinitive).
Fix: She likes reading, jogging, and swimming.
Tip: Make list items match grammatically - all -ing, all to-infinitives, etc.
9. Overuse / Misuse of Passive Voice
Problematic: The conclusion was reached by the researchers after many trials.
Why: Passive voice can hide the actor and weaken clarity (though sometimes appropriate).
Fix (clearer): The researchers reached the conclusion after many trials.
Tip: Use active voice when you want clarity and to show responsibility.
10. Tense Inconsistency
Incorrect: He studied the samples and then finds the result surprising.
Why: Mixing past and present confuses the timeline.
Fix: He studied the samples and then found the result surprising.
Tip: Pick a tense for the paragraph (usually past for methods/results) and stick to it.
- Read sentences slowly - check subject/verb agreement.
- Spot commas joining independent clauses (comma splice).
- Verify common confusables: its/it's, affect/effect, there/their/they're.
- Run a final pass with SnipText’s grammar checker and then read aloud.
Fixing these ten issues will immediately improve clarity and presentation in most student papers. Use the one-line tips for a quick triage and then perform a final human proofread.
FAQ
- Can I rely on grammar checkers to catch everything?
- Grammar checkers catch many surface errors, but they miss context-based mistakes (wrong word choice, logic errors). Always do a final human read and check meaning, not just form.
- What's the fastest fix for comma splices?
- Split into two sentences, add a semicolon, or insert a coordinating conjunction (and, but, so). Choose the one that best preserves rhythm and meaning.
- Is passive voice always wrong?
- No - passive voice is useful when the actor is unknown or unimportant (e.g., methods sections). Prefer active voice for clarity and stronger writing where the actor matters.
- How can I stop mixing tenses?
- Decide whether you’re describing past work (research methods/results) or general truths. Stick with past for completed actions, present for general facts. Re-read each paragraph for consistency.
- Any quick memory trick for its vs. it's?
- Try expanding
it's
to it is or it has. If that works,it's
is correct; otherwise useits
.